Thursday, January 24, 2013

Hole in a Field, Chap 17


A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers of the Future Contest".  I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy.  But I decided that I will post each chapter here on my blog.  There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel.  Here is the start.

Chapter 17:
“What is your shoe size?” The clown was on his last question about the dimensions of Wilton and now nearly ready to make a guess as to the weight of the man.

“13.” Wilton had already given the standard assortment of answers to whatever it was he was talking to, whatever had made itself look like a color deficient clown for this little meeting.  “Though I am unsure as to what brand of shoe you are imagining, because in the past I prefer a slightly looser fit in my Nikes.”

'How in the hell is he doing that?' Maxwell stood more of less in awe of Wilton being able to joke at the Clown, Wilton having picked up on the game aspect; the need to play along. Maxwell knew Wilton had been in bad places before, but this seemed to be hitting him outside any possible comfort zone.  Maxwell moved his fingers across the bat he was holding, the little grooves in the side giving him no comfort, but what the hell else did they have?  Maxwell stood there and watched as Wilton stepped onto the pressure plate.

The clown made a few scribbling gestures in the air, mumbled some calculations: “Carry the four,” “Accounting for the wind resistance,” “Your mother came from a particular climate, have to account for that too,” and then let loose his prediction:  “Too heavy!”

The Clown then jerked fast a lever next to the pressure plate, at which moment the plate dropped out from beneath Wilton.  His eyes, much like Maxwell’s, went wide as he tried to grasp outward to stop his fall.  He fell into darkness, a darkness that was quickly covered by a pressure plate which now could more accurately be described as a trap door.

Maxwell turned fast to the Clown and drew back the bat.  The Clown, for its part, smiled and asked: “So, would you like to play now?”

Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Hole in a Field, Chap 16

A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers of the Future Contest".  I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy.  But I decided that I will post each chapter here on my blog.  There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel.  Here is the start.

Chapter 16:
Todd didn't react immediately.  He had been entirely prepared for Allison to tell him yet again that she wasn't getting anything, and that they needed to keep working the waking world. He didn't expect her to burst the way she did.

Allison seized, her back arching, head tossed back, eyes clenched, and let loose a howling scream to the sky. She slid from her seat, flopping to the ground, and stopping her howl only to gasp before continuing the painful scream deeper and longer.

Todd dropped beside her and pulled her away from the ground in an attempt to keep Allison for beating her head to a pulp as she convulsed. She began struggling instead and he received a full set of fingernails across the face for his efforts.  At which point he was quietly cursing as she continued to howl.

Then there was an immediate silence. Todd’s heart sank as he looked at Allison’s face; her eyes were open, but the irises had turned from brown to deep red and the whites of her eyes looked yellow and dry. Her nose was bleeding.  Todd looked at her agape, his face bleeding from the scratches, and watched as she faintly whispered the words, “Carnival’s come to town,” and slumped motionless into his arms.

Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Hole in a Field, Chap 15


A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers of the Future Contest".  I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy.  But I decided that I will post each chapter here on my blog.  There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel.  Here is the start.

Chapter 15:
Maxwell and Wilton arrived at the source of the voice. It was a Guess Your Weight booth at the terminating line of game stands and concessions stalls.  It was at the end of the particular row of booths and games, creating a dead end.  The booth itself was stark black and white with numerous spiral images and twisted, broken numbers featured on every surface.  A the center of the booth was a massive scale, a black steel plate suspended in front of the most massive spiral, surrounded with broken numbers denoting the weight of the participant.

Maxwell and Wilton looked at the booth. “Honestly,” said Maxwell.  “I was expecting more?”

Wilton turned slightly to Maxwell, his eyes humorless and narrow.

“Sarcasm uncalled for?”

“I guess not,” replied Wilton.

“My greetings to my new challengers.”  The owner of the beckoning voice finally became apparent.  One of the spirals opened like a camera shutter, and out stepped a tall and spindly man, dressed like a mime.  In his right hand he held a large, bright red antique megaphone, in his left a clipboard and pen both also bright red.

“And you are?”  Maxwell decided to do the talking.

“Here to guess your weight,” the talking mime replied.

Wilton’s eyes remained narrow and fixed though a smirk pulled across his face.

“Any prizes?”  Maxwell was hoping that playing into the carnival theme would help.  “Or are we just playing for fun?"

The talking-mime-clown gestured to another spiral shutter where numerous stuffed animals appeared. Sitting amongst them were three familiar bundles: the White Hat Kits, more specifically the parts that had the guns in them.  “Just some brick-a-brack…  toys that fill one with so many hopes.”

“We’ll play.”  Wilton said.

“You sure we-?”

“We’ll play.”  Wilton cut off Maxwell’s question with a half growl and a cavalier smirk that said 'go along with it'.

“Well then,” said the non-mime.  “We’ll start with a few questions.  Then, you get to sit on my scale to see who the winner is.”


Monday, January 21, 2013

Hole in a Field, Chap 14


A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers of the Future Contest".  I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy.  But I decided that I will post each chapter here on my blog.  There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel.  Here is the start.

Chapter 14:
Allison wiped up with a handkerchief, cleaning her hands and face, and sat looking, for the second time that day, at Todd pacing around, barking into his phone.  When he had finished and walked back within earshot, Allison started in. “What did they say?”

“Not much,” Todd replied.  “They agreed with us that your vision falls into the high alert category, but they have no idea what is the best way to respond to this.  They’re going to call back in twenty minutes to tell us what they have come up with.”

“What do you think is going on down in that hole?”

“You are better equipped than I to answer that question.  Want to take another trip with that voodoo you do so well?”

Allison hated that expression that Todd used to describe her talents. “I’m a little hesitant to try again.”  She looked down and away from Todd.  After a moment of silence she mumbled, “ I've heard stories of incidents like this, and the places that surround them. Psychics don’t usually fair well in this sort of environment.  The visions get extreme.”

Todd sighed quickly, rubbed his head, looked off into space, and after numerous other nervous ticks had been tallied off of his awkward silence check list, he decided on a response.  “Alli, I’m going to be honest with you, so try not to take offense.”

“Todd, I’m psychic," said Allison.  "If you are going to tell me about how you've had a crush on me since we toured those Incan ruins, I know.”

“No, it isn't that," said Todd.  "Although thank you for bringing up yet another uncomfortable thing.”

“Sorry.”

“It’s okay.  Look, I didn't used to put a lot of stock into your visions and premonitions, didn’t put a lot into any of the psychics, but Wilton is my friend from college and he is down in a hole with god knows what, along with his wife, who I introduced him to.  Allison, I need you do to whatever it is you do, and help me find my friends.”

“You don’t know-.”

“Correct,” Todd cut her off with a pointing finger.  “That is the whole problem, I need to know. You can do this, you know you can, and you are going to do something right now.”

Allison looked up at Todd, knowing she had to try.  “You know, pep talks like that don’t usually get a guy laid.”

“ I've shot pirates, repelled down cliff sides, and saved you from drowning.  If that stuff didn't get me laid - and it didn't - I question why a pushy pep-talk would.  Now, close your eyes, and get going into the wherever.”

Allison closed her eyes, and started screaming.

Sunday, January 20, 2013

Hole in a Field, Chap 13


A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers of the Future Contest".  I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy.  But I decided that I will post each chapter here on my blog.  There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel.  Here is the start.

Chapter 13:
 “Welcome!  Welcome!  Welcome!”  A voice boomed down the line of games and ticket booths. “Come play my game, if you dare!”

Wilton and Maxwell stalked down the line of game booths and food stands each brandishing their bats, following the challenging invitation of the voice.  Both were filled with anger and purpose, and neither knew what to expect.

“So what should we be expecting?” asked Maxwell.

“I don’t know,” said Wilton.  "I suppose I could tell you to be ready for anything, but that should be a mantra at this point."

“So what is the plan?”  said Maxwell.

“Beyond following the sound of this voice, and kicking its ass," said Wilton.  "I don’t have much of a plan.”

“Wil, you know how I sometimes say that you think too much?”

“Yeah, Max?”

“Can you go back to that?”

Wilton didn’t stop moving toward the voice, but his thoughts began to grind differently, and he decided to take stock of assets.  “Max, what do you have a degree in?”

“Theology," said Maxwell.  "With a minor in folklore. Why?”

“What is the most common religion of the town around here?”

“I don’t know," said Maxwell.  "I don’t really remember. What are you aiming at?”

“Have you ever looked through and read up on what is in a White Hat Kit?”

“No, why?”

“Inside is a mini manual that gives helpful tips for dealing with zany shit like.” Wilton paused and gestured outward to the carnival surrounding them.  “One of the things they recommend for supernatural nonsense is appealing to a higher authority.”

“God?”  Maxwell was a little taken back.

“You’re the expert," said Wilton.  "Which one do you think we should be asking for help?”

"I don’t know," said Maxwell.  "This falls a little outside the purview of typical religious imagery, don’t you think?”

Friday, January 18, 2013

Hole in a Field, Chap 12


A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers of the Future Contest".  I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy.  But I decided that I will post each chapter here on my blog.  There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel.  Here is the start.


Chapter 12:
“Okay, who do we talk to first?”  Allison was not incredibly interested with the more investigative side of White Hat work and so she sat on her park bench with a blank commemorative plate, letting Todd do his thing.

“It varies.  In a small farming town like this, one would begin with local librarians, school authorities, elected officials, and anyone who volunteers information.”  Todd was actually an old hand at the research and information gathering aspects.

“Volunteer?” said Allison.

“Have you ever watched a movie in which a group of out of town visitors begins asking questions of a small town?”

“What do you mean?”  Allison really didn’t understand the illustration Todd was making.

“Okay, um…”  Todd tried to recall a specific instance and failed.  “Well, here’s how it usually progresses: something weird happens, investigators come in, question people, the people give a cold reception to the questioning, and then just as the out of town detectives or whatever give up...”  Todd paused for effect and then turned to Allison, making a twisted up face and making his voice sound gruff like a sea captain’s.  “Then, a local nut job shows up and tells the group some old legend, weird story, or mysterious tale.”  Todd then straightened back up and resumed in a normal voice.  “Those asking the questions follow the new lead, and then uncover something that cracks the whole investigation open.”  Todd punctuated his speech with a wave of his hand, as if signaling to an orchestra that a particular score had ended.

Allison ignored the flourish.  “And this happens often?”

“It happens so often that we have actually coined a term for it.”  Todd stood tight lipped in anticipation of the question he knew was coming, nearly bouncing with the rhythm of his puckish heart.

Allison sighed.  “What is the term for it?”

“Thought you’d never ask," Todd said.  "The term,” he paused for a bit of emphasis, “is: 'Cracking the Local Nut'.”

Allison made a face to denote her lack of interest in puns, and Todd responded by slumping slightly.  “Don’t like it?” asked Todd.

“Eh…” grunted Allison in reply.

“Look,” Todd started again.  “It has worked in the past, and unless you have something else coming in over the higher lines, it's all we got.”  He stared at her for a moment.  He moved his head down to eye level with hers. “Do you have anything coming in on the higher channels?”

Allison huffed slightly and said, “I'll try again.”  She stood, closed her eyes, and began walking in a random direction away from Todd, who proceeded to take her place on the park bench with the blank commemorative plate, and watched her stroll off into the distance then down a street and out of sight beyond a corner store.

She tried to drift off, to go to the place she goes when she needs to see elsewhere or elsewhen or elsewhy, but couldn’t.  She tried again, and failed.  She then started to concentrate on what it is exactly that kept her from focusing, and in the not too distant distance she heard a steady, repeating tapping, and laughter.

            Allison opened her eyes and walked quickly toward the source of the distraction to see a young girl playing with a jump rope and reciting a funny chant.  The girl didn’t notice her approach, or didn’t care, faced away as she was.  After stopping for a missed skip, she started again.

In the field across the way,
On this dreary, cloudy day,
The faceless man makes his way,
Down the dirt road street.

Up and up the tents all go,
Red like blood and white like snow,
And every little child knows,
Today's the day to come.

The carnival has come to town,
The rides go up, the rides go down,
The people come from all around,
And smile their happy smiles,

And in the tent just at the end,
The clown awaits with tales to spin.
And many a child goes up to him,
And the clown's face is a grin,

His teeth are white, his eyes are blue,
He hands balloons for me and you,
"Your little sister wants one too,"
He smiles but it isn’t true.

His skin is pale, his voice is high,
His fingers reach toward the sky,
He smells like death, you start to cry,
And try to walk but why…

He follows you into the wood,
Just like you kind of knew he would,
You run fast; a good kid should,
He moves faster, wolf after hood .

You run hard, you run too fast,
You try to make your breathing last,
You know your time on earth has past,
The clown’s laugh echoes aghast.

You'll never see the light again,
The opaque sky will start to spin,
You'll see the clown's last, awful grin,
And then you'll see no more, it’s the end,

The little girl stopped her chant and stood still, staring into space, then slowly slumped and sobbed.  She then began to full out cry and bawl, covering her face and dropping to the ground.  Allison, struck by the whole thing, started to walk up to the girl to offer comfort, but then the crying turned to laughter from behind her.  Allison turned to see a mime, very tall and spindly with dark eyes.  The mime was holding the string of a bright red balloon, with a wide white smile plastered across his face. She turned back and the little girl was lying curled and dirty and-.

“Well, do you have anything coming in on the higher channels?”  Todd was staring into her eyes as she sat on the bench with the blank commemorative plate, his eyes narrowing with concern.  “Ali, your head is bleeding.”

Allison reached up to see and saw the tips of her fingers were coated in blood. She checked her other hand and found the same.  She looked at Todd who was wide eyed and perplexed at the sudden invisible wound.  “I think we might have a bigger problem then we realized," said Allison.  "Though a bit cliché with its menace, if you ask me."

Hole in a Field, Chap 11


A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers of the Future Contest".  I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy.  But I decided that I will post each chapter here on my blog.  There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel.  Here is the start.

Chapter 11:
Maxwell and Wilton heard the scream in tandem, and neither hesitated to follow it.  Bats in hand they stormed out of the confection hut and blazed the paths between the games and stands, all the while calling Clair’s name in frenzy and panic.

They ran and scooted to stops and turns, careful not to lose sight of each other, but once they had found the apparent source of the scream, a fortune telling machine with a mallet lying uselessly in front of it, they realized that they were too late.  Clair had vanished into the carnival.

“Clair!” screamed Wilton.

“Clair?!  Oh, shit where did she go?”  Maxwell turned in place looking for something; displaced carnival furniture, a scrap of clothing, a mark from a shoe scrapping the ground.  Nothing denoted a departure in any direction.

Wilton continued to circle the area, calling her name with all of the effort he could expend, but to no avail.

“Wilton?”

“Clair!” Wilton ignored Maxwell, he just kept screaming off into the park, unable to feel anything but burning anger rushing to his face.

“Wilton!” screamed Maxwell.  Maxwell then grabbed for Wilton, and wrestled with him until he had calmed slightly.

“Max,” Wilton was almost in tears, his face apple red.  “We have to find her.”

“Wil,” said Maxwell, grabbing onto Wilton’s shoulders and staring into the man’s eyes.  “Do you have any theories?”

Somehow this question stabilized Wilton  His jaw relaxed, and his eyes, while still tearing, softened their angry gaze into the look of someone who was trying to wrap his head around a child’s riddle that had to do with a pun and a duck.  “Yes,” said Wilton.  “Something is here with us, and it has Clair, and we’ll probably meet it soon.”

“Why do you say that, Wil?  Why will we meet it soon?”

“Well,” said Wilton, “because it will be done with Clair eventually, and we’re they only ones left in the park.  So, we’ll be next.”