A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron
Hubbard "Writers of the
Future Contest". I did not win, and I know why, my story is
really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy. But I decided that I
will post each chapter here on my blog. There are 37 very short chapters,
for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel. Here
is the start.
Chapter 31:
Todd flicked open his phone. “Hi Jenna, I’m kind of in shit creek right
now, and I think it’s about to turn into shit rapids before ending at a shit
fall onto pointy, shit-covered rocks.”
“Todd, what happened?” Said Jenna.
“I… You know, I’ll tell you later.
Can you give me some advice for what is going on?” Todd needed backup. Or more guns. Or an airlift
out of this nowhere.
“Yeah, is Allison with you?”
“No.” Todd really did not need this conversation
right now. “She’s dead.”
“What?!“
“Stop!” Todd felt the scratches on his face and chest
burning. He needed a way out, not more of this.
“I am in mortal danger right now. I need an out, I need a rescue, I need
something. And anything to improve the situation would be fine.”
“Todd, I… we, can’t help you,” said
Jenna sadly.
His heart dropped a little. “Explain.”
“We can’t find you, at all,"
said Jenna. "A few hours ago you
dropped off of the GPS. We called the cell phone network and they can’t find
your phone on the planet. We can’t even figure out how you got through, we've called a dozen times.”
“You know where I am, you sent me
here.” Then Todd thought back, he
remembered the call but not the directions he was given, not even where he had
come from to get here. He wasn't anywhere. "Jenna, I can't remember how I got
here. Where am I? Why does my compass say everywhere is north,
am I at the south pole? Where am I
Jenna? Help me."
He was Nowhere.
“We looked for the directions we
gave," said Jenna. "Nobody
around here can even remember what state you are in, where you were traveling
from, or the name of the place you and Allison rented your car. We can’t find Maxwell, Wilton, or Clair. You’re all gone, and we don’t know where you
are.”
Todd decided then that he was on
his own. “Well, if I manage to get out
of here, I’ll give you a call alright?”
“Todd? What did you say? You’re breaking up, why are
you laughing? Todd?”
The phone went dead, and Todd
snapped it shut.
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