A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron
Hubbard "Writers of the
Future Contest". I did not win, and I know why, my story is
really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy. But I decided that I
will post each chapter here on my blog. There are 37 very short chapters,
for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel. Here
is the start.
Chapter 14:
Allison wiped up with a
handkerchief, cleaning her hands and face, and sat looking, for the second time
that day, at Todd pacing around, barking into his phone. When he had finished and walked back within
earshot, Allison started in. “What did they say?”
“Not much,” Todd replied. “They agreed with us that your vision falls
into the high alert category, but they have no idea what is the best way to
respond to this. They’re going to call
back in twenty minutes to tell us what they have come up with.”
“What do you think is going on down
in that hole?”
“You are better equipped than I to
answer that question. Want to take
another trip with that voodoo you do so well?”
Allison hated that expression that
Todd used to describe her talents. “I’m a little hesitant to try again.” She looked down and away from Todd. After a moment of silence she mumbled, “ I've heard stories of incidents like this, and the places that surround them. Psychics
don’t usually fair well in this sort of environment. The visions get extreme.”
Todd sighed quickly, rubbed his
head, looked off into space, and after numerous other nervous ticks had been
tallied off of his awkward silence check list, he decided on a response. “Alli, I’m going to be honest with you, so
try not to take offense.”
“Todd, I’m psychic," said
Allison. "If you are going to tell
me about how you've had a crush on me since we toured those Incan ruins, I
know.”
“No, it isn't that," said
Todd. "Although thank you for
bringing up yet another uncomfortable thing.”
“Sorry.”
“It’s okay. Look, I didn't used to put a lot of stock into
your visions and premonitions, didn’t put a lot into any of the psychics, but Wilton
is my friend from college and he is down in a hole with god knows what, along
with his wife, who I introduced him to.
Allison, I need you do to whatever it is you do, and help me find my
friends.”
“You don’t know-.”
“Correct,” Todd cut her off with a
pointing finger. “That is the whole problem,
I need to know. You can do this, you know you can, and you are going to do
something right now.”
Allison looked up at Todd, knowing
she had to try. “You know, pep talks
like that don’t usually get a guy laid.”
“ I've shot pirates, repelled down
cliff sides, and saved you from drowning.
If that stuff didn't get me laid - and it didn't - I question why a
pushy pep-talk would. Now, close your eyes,
and get going into the wherever.”
Allison closed her eyes, and started
screaming.
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