A little while
ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers
of the Future Contest".
I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than
Science Fiction or Fantasy. But I decided that I will post each chapter
here on my blog. There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000
words, about a fifth of a modern novel. Here
is the start.
Chapter 4:
The area was dimly lit.
“Well that sure as hell was
perilous, ominous, creepy, foreboding… oh, hell, if I had my thesaurus it would
be a great many things.”
“So you’re saying it sucked, Wil?”
“In a manner of speaking, Max. Clair, are you all right?”
“Yes.” A weary-eyed head rose up from the
ground. “I guess. Little dizzy, kinda sick, really hard to focus.”
"Did you hit your
head?" Said Maxwell.
"I'm guessing we all hit something,"
said Wilton. "Clair, just sit still.
Try and get your bearings. When your head feels clearer maybe try to do
some of that voodoo you do so well with your premonitions."
“Anybody have any thoughts as to
how we aren't dead?” Max was remembering
the fall and the amount of gear he had been carrying, and looking around he saw
evidence of neither. "Or where all
our stuff is?"
“I don't know, Max.” Wilton looked up, expecting to see the hole
they had been descending into, but instead finding only a cave ceiling in the
shadowy area. “Though it might be
related to why we are currently in a cave, rather than a hole.”
It was at this moment that Clair's
head stopped throbbing, fading down to a dull ache in the back of her eyes. She began to take in her surroundings,
finding that while the area around the group was a dead end, it was a dead end
only in three directions. The fourth
direction appeared to taper off into a winding cavern from which the little
light that was present seemed to be coming from. “I think we need to go that way,” Clair said,
pointing down the cavern.
“Well of all the ways there are to
go, that would seem to be the one that actually exists,” Wilton said, picking himself up and brushing
himself off. Then he held out his hand
for Clair, who took it and had to be almost lifted off the ground, steadying herself
on Wilton afterword.
Max lazily stumbled to his feet to
follow Wilton and Clair. They then
proceeded down the clean and dimly lit cave.
“So… any theories?” Maxwell queried.
“None,” answered Wilton.
“Any psychic premonitions?”
“Sorry Max, no,” Clair responded,
one hand on Wilton's shoulder, the other hand switching back and forth between massaging
her temples and her eyes.
“Anything I should do?”
“We’ll let you know,” Wilton answered, trying, between Maxwell’s
question marks, to gather his thoughts.
As the group proceeded down the
brightening and presumably subterranean area they each in turn allowed theories
to bounce around in their minds. Max was
mentally a doomsayer, recalling various bits of story that he had heard about
the Underworld. He held it together by
peppering the air with inane questions like "Do you suppose this cave was
dug, or is it natural?" and "If someone left us without our gear
here, why not leave us with something else aside from our clothes?"
Clair's mind worked differently. Rather than trying to grasp harder at her
surroundings, she tried to let them become more fluid and insubstantial. She didn't talk and instead entered into a
haze, her eyes glazing over and faraway ethereal echoes touched her mind's ear. Clair counted the steps they took and kept
time with Wilton's swaying shoulders, allowing herself to be as close to
meditating as she could while still walking; she was nearly hypnotized.
Wilton mostly just tried to use
Maxwell's questions as jumping off points for his own theories, and started
recalling the caves he had visited in Egypt and that shadowy thing he had
talked to in those catacombs. He thought
back further to his own childhood and the stories he had read about survival
and cave diving and geology and anything else he could dredge up that would
make this situation somehow more manageable, but this wasn't same old same old,
and that made him grouchy, and his answers became more biting toward Maxwell, and
nothing came of either's speculation.
"Max," said Wilton. "Let's talk about something else aside
from this cave."
"Doesn't this kind of demand
our full attention?" asked Maxwell cocking an eyebrow and pursing his
lips.
"I am a big believer in the
cross-polinization of ideas," said Wilton.
"Unrelated ideas and fields can link up in unexpected ways, give
you new approaches."
"What?"
"Someone looks at something
for too long," said Wilton, "they can't see a bigger picture. If they allow themselves to take a step back
and get some perspective on the whole thing, they might see a fresh
approach."
"Okay," said
Maxwell. "That makes some
sense. How about... What were the White Hats like when it first
started up?"
"Hmm, well I wasn't one of the
first guys," Wilton replied.
"But I met them before they went online. I had just graduated and was working in a
rare book library. They came in to see
an original copy of 'The Hammer of the Witches' for reference.
"Turns out that book had been
stolen. I helped them to find the local
loon who was using it to identify, torture, and kill local people he thought to
be witches. We were in the newspaper, my
coworkers and I were then fired for the book having been stolen to begin with,
and I decided to work with the original guys who started things while looking
for a new job. Turns out we didn't need
it because the paper got us sponsorship.
We worked as antiques appraisers and private detectives in New England
for a while. Then we went viral with our
website."
"That is awesome," said
Maxwell.
"Thank you," replied
Wilton. "A little while later I
recruited a friend of mine who used to be a cop and he introduced me to
Clair."
"What?" said Clair,
blinking quickly and focusing on them.
"Nothing, Clair," said
Wilton. "Just talking with
Max. Feel free to keep poking
around."
The group continued on in quiet for
a while longer.
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