A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron
Hubbard "Writers of the
Future Contest". I did not win, and I know why, my story is
really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy. But I decided that I
will post each chapter here on my blog. There are 37 very short chapters,
for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel. Here
is the start.
Chapter 22:
Maxwell continued to wander the
carnival. Lost and without real direction, he would pick arbitrary points of
reference to navigate. Get to the Ferris
wheel, and he did. Get to the Log Flume,
and he did. Get to the Super slide, and
he did. But no matter how much he
managed to map out in his head, how good a grip he got on the place itself, he couldn't formulate a plan, a meaningful place to look. He called their names for a while, called for
help after that, until eventually he just sat down on a random bench in a
random set of shops, and thought.
He was there for a short while,
beaten and tired, and holding his head in his hands. Then Maxwell felt someone sit down beside
him. He was nervous, and angry at
himself for not being aware, for letting himself be stripped of his edge because
he hadn't run into anything.
“You can look at me, you know,” the
voice was friendly it seemed, and very different from the clown Maxwell had
killed, and so he looked at him.
The figure that sat next to Maxwell
looked like a rich guy who had been going on vacation, but somewhere along the
way had decided to put on clown make-up to audition for the circus. Failing to be accepted into the circus fold,
he had then stabbed himself in the eye with a kitchen knife, right up to the
handle, then a little further. “Hi,” Maxwell
said.
“Hi,” the clown said, “My name’s Ernie.”
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