A little while
ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron Hubbard "Writers
of the Future Contest".
I did not win, and I know why, my story is really more horror than
Science Fiction or Fantasy. But I decided that I will post each chapter
here on my blog. There are 37 very short chapters, for a total of 15,000
words, about a fifth of a modern novel. Here
is the start.
(This is where the B-plot starts...)
Chapter 8:
Standing at the
mouth of the hole in the field was Allison, a White Hat, and in spite of what
she knew, she was hoping that her partner Todd was getting good news.
“No, you-,” Todd paused, cut off by the voice at the
other end of the phone.
“No, listen, I’m telling you-,” cut
off once more Todd began to look frustrated.
“I’m telling you, I see the van they rented, I see Allison looking down
into the massive ass hole, and I see climbing cables that lead into said hole-,”
Todd nods to the voice. “Yeah, but-,”
Another pause.
“Look, they went down the hole, and
they haven’t come back yet.”
Another pause.
“I don’t know why they left without
us, I would ask, but they appear to be down a hole right now.” Todd then hung up the phone with a snap,
considered casting it into the depths, and then simply put it in his pocket.
“So, how are things with the Hat
Rack?” Allison knew, of course, her
ability to hear was not at all impaired, but it seemed polite to ask.
Todd stood with slumped shoulders,
giving Allison a blank but frustrated look.
“You call them next time.” He
then shuffled up next to her and gazed downward. “So, what do you think they found down
there?”
Allison closed her eyes, and after
a moment of feeling like she was standing in a cornfield, she felt like she was
somewhere that was not there. In this
state she often had a hard time describing, Allison listened. She heard a few things: a steady tune, the
grinding of gears, chains, and wheels on a track, tapping, and then lastly
Allison heard several different laughs.
Then she remembered she was standing in a cornfield, turned to Todd, and
asked “Do you feel like getting a corn dog?”
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