A little while ago I wrote a short story for the L. Ron
Hubbard "Writers of the
Future Contest". I did not win, and I know why, my story is
really more horror than Science Fiction or Fantasy. But I decided that I
will post each chapter here on my blog. There are 37 very short chapters,
for a total of 15,000 words, about a fifth of a modern novel. Here
is the start.
Chapter 9:
“Do you think any of these stands
have food in them?” wondered Maxwell.
“Thanks,” Wilton had been too preoccupied to remember
that he was hungry. “Now I have the
overwhelming need to look.”
Clair stood with her newly acquired
mallet and concentrated on their surroundings. She had never been able to prompt
visions and premonitions to come to her before, more just letting herself be
open and hoping the universe let things drift into her mental awareness. But even if she had never been able to, some
of the other White Hat psychics could and she had been experimenting with the
concept for a while. Meditation,
hypnosis, pot once or twice while in Europe; while she had won a few scratch
off tickets it had never paid off in a crunch time before (though considering
how many crunch times she had seen and the fact that she was still around,
maybe she just wasn't fully aware of how good her gift was.) Regardless of all previous experience being a
failure to launch, trying to be psychic seemed one of the best possible uses
for her time as Maxwell and Wilton were currently halting the group’s progress
through the carnival in search of elephant ears and sugar waffles.
Clair began her inner searching,
and after a few minutes of coming up with nothing, she began to physically
wander, staring off into space as she took small and slow steps forward and
around different booths.
“Eureka!” Wilton exclaimed as he halted tearing through a
set of cupboards in a booth he had noted as having a deep fryer.
“What’d you get?” Maxwell bounded out of his particular search
pattern and up to the serving window of Wilton’s new-found kitchen.
“The proverbial gold mine of junk
food," said Wilton. "Unlike
caramel apples they are not vaguely nutritious, and unlike cotton candy they
have sustaining substance.”
“Corndogs?” Said Maxwell.
“My god, Max," said Wilton
happily, for the first time since the fall into the underworld. "You most certainly do have the deductive
skills to be a White Hat. Help me start
the fryer.”
Maxwell ran around through the
booth’s back entrance and began cranking knobs on the cooker. As it boiled to
life he turned to face Wilton, finding the man holding a knife out to him.
“Keep this with you,” Wilton
said. “I don’t know why you need knives
to make carnival food, but I think it may come in handy.”
“Cool by me.” Max put the thing away in his pocket, hoping
he wouldn't accidently cut the hell out of his hand later by accident.
At this point both of men had sort
of lost track of the bigger picture, and had in the meantime gained a much
smaller, more conquerable, picture in the cooking and devouring of
corndogs. Clair, conversely, had become
a little too focused on the big picture, and had wandered in a
psychic-seeking-the-answer-to-it-all frame of mind out of sight of the other
two. She did however wander into the
sight of something else.
A shrill and spine-chilling cackle
suddenly roused Clair from her not-quite-dreaming and forced her to ready her
mallet at the source.
“Shall I tell your fortune, or maybe read you palm. I’ll see your future, and it won’t take
long. Madam Zorrena is at your
call. Come with a question, anyone at
all.”
Clair relaxed slightly, allowing her
mallet to lower, but did not let her hostile and frustrated gaze drop from the
gypsy woman’s face. Though only a wax
torso in a glass case, the attraction remained one of the strangest things
Clair had happened across that day, and that list seemed to show no signs of
ceasing to grow.
Clair then stepped toward the old (old
almost to the point of being an anachronism) device and examined it
closer. It had two slots, one for a coin
payment, and the other for the card that told the fortune. Clair patted her sides, each pocket in turn,
until realizing that her change had gone the way of the repelling gear. She allowed her head to drop, and looked at
her toes in hopeless bit of
I-thought-maybe-I-had-been-led-to-this-point-by-my-gift-but-that-appears-to-not-be-so
moping. Between her toes, sitting flat
on the clean hewn stone ground, was a single quarter.
Clair was starting to get a
this-must-be-a-'my-gift-lead-me-here'-vibe, and picked up the quarter, allowing
her mallet to fall from her grip, flat on the ground between her and the
machine. She then dropped the quarter
into the slot.
Madam Zorrena’s eyes flashed, her
mouth stood agape, she swayed her head from side to side raising it back as if
to scream, then lowered it as if in a trance.
Lastly the head rose back to its original location, and she disappeared
from view the glass of the machine had gone dark. A click followed and a card emerged from the
second slot. Clair picked it up to read
the words: 'LOOK BEHIND YOU!'
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